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Tuesday, 28 July 2015

Healthy Lunches

Learning Intention:    

Walt: Analyse text to identify examples of ethos, pathos and logos.  

Persuasive Reading Analysis :Healthy Lunches
Take another look at the persuasive piece of reading/ writing.
What strategies does the author use to try to persuade you?
Below are strategies writers often use for this form of writing.  Read through each
strategy and decide whether the author used that strategy by writing yes or no in the second
column. If you write yes, then explain how the author used that strategy.
Persuasive strategy
Yes / No
How the author used it?
Claim – States the main  
point or stance
Yes
The author said “That children should eat and drink healthy food everyday in school to be healthy’!   
Big Names –  Mentions experts and
important people to support the argument
Yes
In some schools children are provided with milk that is delivered fresh every morning.
This author is trying to convince children
aged 5 - 12 to eat healthy and make healthy lunches so that they could are a model for younger children.    
Logos – Uses logic, numbers, or  facts to support the argument
Yes
Milk is known to support healthy teeth and bones. Fizzy drinks are not good for teeth because the sugar in  fizzy drinks causes decay.
should be should be banned from school because it is not healthy and it will rot their teeth, and that is the school's rule.   Children have to eat fruit and vegetables everyday because it will keep all of them healthy.
Pathos – Appeals to the audience’s emotions
Yes
Inferring from the text the writer is emphasising the importance that children should eat a healthy lunch to help them grow strong and healthy.                        
Ethos – Tries to build trust and
credibility
Yes
The writer assumes that the reader has knowledge of healthy food and eating .habits but does not include evidence of research
Kairos – Builds a sense of urgency  
for the cause
Yes
He emphasises  what will happen to a child's’ teeth and bones if they do not eat well.
Research – Uses studies and  information to make the  argument seem more convincing;  
this can be in the form of words,
graphs, tables, or illustrations
No


Tuesday, 30 June 2015

Take a challenge and face your fears!!!

At camp I am a little worried about swimming because when I swim I have doubts and think that I might drown. I have never been away from home by myself only with my older sisters, but at least I have people I know surrounding me. This has been my first time at camp M.E.R.C with my classmates and teacher. When I go to camp my strategies are to not think too much about home and my parents.  And try not to get scared of falling out of the raft or dinghy. When we go to camp I won’t be that worried about getting used to where we are because I have classmates in my year that haven’t been to M.E.R.C camp before or away without their parents.

Monday, 29 June 2015

Where would you go?

We conducted a investigation on where was the best place to go camping. To figure out were to go camping we made a tally graph showing how we worked out were to go camping and how many voted.

Friday, 26 June 2015

The blind game !!!


26/6/15
THE BLIND GAME
In preparation for camp next week our team challenge was to guide our partner who was blind safely to the gate entrance and back to the classroom without getting hurt.
Challenge (1) Room 8 students were paired up in numbers of 1&2  so number 1 was the guider and number 2 was the blind person who had lead their blind person to the gate entrance without stepping on the grass.
Challenge (2) After we had lead them to the gate entrance the partners who were blind which was number 2 were asked to come together in a group , and that was when it got twisted number 2’s became number 1’s and had to lead their partner anywhere except the car park and the bottom court. When we got our partner they had no idea where they were going and what was going on. My partner Ingrid tripped a few time when she was walking because I told her to put her leg up  but she didn't nowhere to put it. Then when you have lead you partner around school you were to take back to class safely.
Challenge (3) Once everyone has arrived in class our teacher Miss Dines showed us what our next challenge was. We were switch and move our desk around  and made  loud noises so that the person who was blind think what we were doing in the classroom after we twisted and moved the table Johnny (blind person) was spun around dizzy so that he could get confused and not no where he was walking and stepping on. After Johnnies turn the whole class were again was told to find a partner and only lead them by talking them to going in the right path.
Ending:

The whole point of all three challenges were to guide you partner safely back to class have trust in the partner that was telling you where to go and to have faith in them.



Friday, 12 June 2015

My buddy bloggers weekend


Today in room 8 my buddy and I wrote down what is buddy blogging and what she did on the Queen's birthday weekend .

Friday, 29 May 2015

Are you being cybersmart?


WALHT classify information under the heading's personal or private.

Friday, 22 May 2015

My Dove


Today room 2 class came over to make doves for Pentecost. This is one of doves Desiree from room 2 class colored and cut out.