Eli's all about me!

Today in room 8 our buddy bloggers came over and told us about what kind of things they like and do. My buddy Eli likes to play tag,eat chocolate and ice cream. His best friends are Matthew,Cruzinho,Chester,Peter,Sione and Hanz.

Back with my buddy blogger Eli!

It was the start of the term and I was back with my partner Eli from room 2. This picture of him shows how he came into our class to put comments on his blog.

Best advertisement ad made!

The Persuasive Reading Analysis: Best Advertisement Ad Ever

Take another look at the persuasive piece of reading/ writing.

What strategies does the author use to try to persuade you?

Below are strategies writers often use for this form of writing.  Read through each

strategy and decide whether the author used that strategy by writing yes or no in the second column. If you write yes, then explain how the author used that strategy.

(LI) Write a critique on advertisement that includes ethos,pathos and logos.

Persuasive strategy	Yes / No	How the author used it?
Claim – States the main   point or stance	Yes	The purpose behind this advertisement , I believe is to make people think about what they can do to help others in need. And what little things they do can go a long way if they helped people living on the streets. From the actions of the man he is showing what people can do to help other even if it just a little thing it or they can go a long way to what they want to do in the future.
Big Names –  Mentions experts and important people to support the argument
Ethos – Tries to build trust and credibility	Yes	Six actors, including a dog, a child and four adults support the message in this advertisement. As you see in the advertisement every single day the man wakes up and visits the people by helping them giving them food and money. The actor (the man) see’s a little girl and her mother begging on the road for money to pay for her to go to school. The thoughtful man give all the money he's got in his wallet just to help this mother give her children's education. He leaves food for an elderly woman but she doesn’t know that this man is giving her food to eat.
Pathos – Appeals to the audience’s emotions	Yes	This thoughtful man appeals to the audience emotions because we can see that living on the street starving without food is reality to some people around the world. This advertisement is emotional because of how people react to what this man was doing to help other, when you watch it you will see people nodding their head in disappointment  saying in their head why he was doing that - giving money to the poor feeding the starving dog.
Logos – Uses logic, numbers, or  facts to support the argument	Yes	While you watch the ad you will see on how the man is talking about if you help other you can make a difference to them and even if it is just giving a dead plant some water. Or feed a dog that maybe didn't eat for days till he saw the man or even if is just giving banana’s to you neighbour.
Kairos – Builds a sense of urgency  for the cause	Yes	The writers that giving back to the poor is and can do something to change a life or to make them happy.
Research – Uses studies and   information to make the   argument seem more convincing;  this can be in the form of words, graphs, tables, or illustrations.	Yes	As seen in the advertisement how the mother and her daughter is is asking for money this really does happen to people in parts of the world and sometimes we just don’t know about.

Emotional Advertisement

Best Advertisement Ever:

(LI) Write a critique on advertisement that includes ethos,pathos and logos.

The purpose behind this advertisement , I believe is to make people think about what they can do to help others in need. And what little things they do can go a long way if they helped people living on the streets. From the actions of the man he is showing what people can do to help other even if it just a little thing it or they can go a long way to what they want to do in the future.

Six actors, including a dog, a child and four adults support the message in this advertisement. As you see in the advertisement every single day the man wakes up and visits the people by helping them giving them food and money. The actor (the man) see’s a little girl and her mother begging on the road for money to pay for her to go to school. The thoughtful man gives  all the money he's got in his wallet just to help this mother give her child a education. He leaves food for an elderly woman but she doesn't know that this man is giving her food to eat.

This thoughtful man appeals to the audience emotions because we can see that living on the street starving without food is reality to some people around the world. This advertisement is emotional because of how people react to what this man was doing to help other, when you watch it you will see people nodding their heads in disappointment and  saying in their heads why he was doing that - giving money to the poor feeding the starving dog.                                

While you watch the ad you will see on how the man is talking about if you help other you can make a difference to them and even if it is just giving a dead plant some water , or feeding  a dog that maybe didn't eat for days till he saw the man or even if is just giving banana’s to you neighbour.

The writers is trying to send a message out to the whole world that giving back to the poor is and can do something to change a life or to make them happy.

Cadbury chocolate eggs

Persuasive Reading Analysis: Analysis text using ethos,pathos and logos

Take another look at the persuasive piece of reading/ writing.

What strategies does the author use to try to persuade you?

Below are strategies writers often use for this form of writing.  Read through each

strategy and decide whether the author used that strategy by writing yes or no in the second column. If you write yes, then explain how the author used that strategy.

Persuasive strategy	Yes / No	How the author used it?
Claim – States the main   point or stance	Yes	The writer very cleverly “ uses the phrase Don't get caught! At the beginning of the advertisement and repeats at the end and throughout the whole ad.
Big Names –  Mentions experts and important people to support the argument		Cadbury is the name of the brand and is named after the found owner John cadbury. In Fact John Cadbury first lived in England and moved from England to here to make chocolate covered eggs now in double chocolate covered eggs and other chocolates.
Ethos – Tries to build trust and credibility	Yes	This writer very cleverly uses the word “This little angel” in the clip so that the audience thinks that she is good little girl but actually she is a little girl eating chocolate during class time .
Pathos – Appeals to the audience’s emotions	No
Logos – Uses logic, numbers, or  facts to support the argument	Yes	While watching the ad at the end you will see and throughout the ad the writer is talking about what is inside the double chocolate covered egg which is a yolky caramel inside.
Kairos – Builds a sense of urgency  for the cause	Yes	Because the writer said they are irresistible meaning that if you don’t go and get you your own egg you're going to miss out.
Research – Uses studies and   information to make the   argument seem more convincing;  this can be in the form of words, graphs, tables, or illustrations.	No

Irresistible Chocolate covered eggs

Cadbury Caramel Eggs:

(LI) Write advertising critique  about and advertisement using ethos pathos and logos

(Claim)

The writer very cleverly “ uses the phrase Don't get caught! At the beginning of the advertisement and repeats at the end and throughout the whole ad.

(Big Names )

Cadbury is the name of the brand and is named after the found owner John cadbury. In Fact John Cadbury first lived in England and moved from en gland to here to make chocolate covered eggs now in double chocolate  and other  different kinds of chocolates.

(Ethos )

This writer very cleverly uses the word “This little angel” in the clip so that the audience thinks that she is good little girl but actually she is a little girl eating chocolate during class time.

(Logos )

While watching the ad at the end you will see and throughout the ad the writer is talking about what is inside the double chocolate covered egg which is a yolky caramel inside.

(Kairos )

Because the writer said they are irresistible meaning that if you don’t go and get you your own egg you're going to miss out.

Healthy Lunches

Learning Intention:    

Walt: Analyse text to identify examples of ethos, pathos and logos.  

Persuasive Reading Analysis :Healthy Lunches

Take another look at the persuasive piece of reading/ writing.

What strategies does the author use to try to persuade you?

Below are strategies writers often use for this form of writing.  Read through each

strategy and decide whether the author used that strategy by writing yes or no in the second

column. If you write yes, then explain how the author used that strategy.

Persuasive strategy	Yes / No	How the author used it?
Claim – States the main   point or stance	Yes	The author said “That children should eat and drink healthy food everyday in school to be healthy’!
Big Names –  Mentions experts and important people to support the argument	Yes	In some schools children are provided with milk that is delivered fresh every morning. This author is trying to convince children aged 5 - 12 to eat healthy and make healthy lunches so that they could are a model for younger children.
Logos – Uses logic, numbers, or  facts to support the argument	Yes	Milk is known to support healthy teeth and bones. Fizzy drinks are not good for teeth because the sugar in  fizzy drinks causes decay. should be should be banned from school because it is not healthy and it will rot their teeth, and that is the school's rule.   Children have to eat fruit and vegetables everyday because it will keep all of them healthy.
Pathos – Appeals to the audience’s emotions	Yes	Inferring from the text the writer is emphasising the importance that children should eat a healthy lunch to help them grow strong and healthy.
Ethos – Tries to build trust and credibility	Yes	The writer assumes that the reader has knowledge of healthy food and eating .habits but does not include evidence of research
Kairos – Builds a sense of urgency   for the cause	Yes	He emphasises  what will happen to a child's’ teeth and bones if they do not eat well.
Research – Uses studies and  information to make the  argument seem more convincing;   this can be in the form of words, graphs, tables, or illustrations	No